Thursday, July 19, 2007
dancer in the dark
the lights went out. Silence. I was alone at home. The hall of the house i live in is largish, and largely unencumbered by furniture. I felt the sinews of my body. i could hear my breath so clearly. I twitched, i followed the impulse. I moved. for ten minutes, i felt my body flow. Towards and away from an imagined flicker, every rustle distinct outside, a force inside almost audible. For ten minutes, i was floating. Just a dancer that no one saw.
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you're stunning in front of an audience, and beautiful alone.
that's the most beautiful thing i've read this week.
j
Sac: biased, say i...
J: thank you for (a)Being the first anonymous person who has possibly read/ commented on my fledgling blog and (b) for making my day:)
It is just me being the usual raging cauldron of hormones or did anyone else find this incredibly, um...(I hate this word I think) 'erotic'? Ooer!
wishfulthinker! YEAAAA ! someone reads my blog!! (cartwheels)... it was more sensual than oozing sexuality actually, but (stupid grin) and somemore cartwheels:)
Ahem. Sensual. Very.
@ Sac & WT, you guys live! Well:)
i tried Dogville - but somehow the mood wasn't right so we didn't get thru it - will surely give it another shot! thanx for dropping by!
Very well written! Enjoyed a good piece of work after long
nevrmind:biggrin and welcom mats to my space
Tartrazina :Fast forward if you must, but watch the end, definately! it's tedious, but soo worth it... thanks fr dropping by, as well, you!
Fanaah : Much thanks! do come by again:)
Your post title reminds me of one of my favorite films. :)
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